Helping Your Child Write Strong Descriptions

October 13, 2017

Why Pray?

God knows everything.

He knows my thoughts.

He knows my desires. He knows my wants.

He knows my failings. He knows my temptations and my sins.

He knows.

So why pray?

My list is long.

I want. I need.

I want my day to go smoothly.

I need to feel His peace.

I want a deeper relationship with my kids.

I need more time with my husband.

I want to make a difference in the world.

I need five minutes without an interruption.

Prayer is a confession of human weakness.

  Prayer says like no other, I need you, God. I can’t do it without you.

And I can’t.

This “I can’t” place is where I find my wayward heart,

wandering through the tasks of my day.

Prayer centers me and brings me to an “I need your help” place.

Bow your head often throughout the day dear homeschool mom. Fold your hands.

And let God lift you through humble prayer like a young eaglet learning to fly.

 The LORD is near to all who call on him, to all who call on him in truth. Psalm 145: 18

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Helping Your Child Write Strong Descriptions

“Whenever you go out to paint, try to forget what objects you have in front of you – a tree, a house, a field or whatever. Merely think, here is a little squeeze of blue, here an oblong of pink, here a streak of yellow, and paint it just as it looks to you, until it gives your own naïve impression of the scene in front of you.” – Claude Monet

An artist paints with color. A writer paints with words. Words are carefully chosen by the author and beautifully placed to fill the reader’s mind with a picture.

How can you, as an educator, coach your child to write strong descriptions? Try this exercise:

1. Choose a noun, person, place or thing. Imagine it or better yet, especially for young writers, get a picture of it. Better yet, allow the child to handle it.

2. Observe the details with your child. Identify the five senses of the noun, f possible.

3. Add a simile or metaphor. In other words, compare it to something else.

4. Ask your child to choose a few words from their list to create sentences


1. Noun: Apple Study the picture. Or better yet, get a real apple.



2. Explore the senses:

  • Sight: red, rosy, speckled with yellow dots, shiny
  • Sound: crunchy, snappy
  • Taste: juicy, tart
  • Smell: sweet, sour, spicey
  • Touch: smooth, hard

3. Compare it:

  • It’s like autumn.
  • It’s like a hand-picked snack.
  • It’s like sweet candy

4. Make sentences: Remember your child doesn’t have to use all the words.

I crunched a rosy apple with yellow speckles. It tasted like sweet autumn candy.

Another writing exercise that taught our children the use of carefully chosen description words was a game I learned when I was small. The teacher chooses similar objects, let’s say as an example, rocks. Each child gets one rock and the kiddo is instructed to describe it in detail. The teacher or other students have to guess, based on the description, which rock is which.

You can also play Here to Help Learning‘s Game, Make a Noun Do Anything! It’s a silly game, but kids love it! As they play, kids get to see how words change the picture in the reader’s mind. You can find the game in all the Paragraph Levels in lesson 12.

These exercises and games can help teach your child that strong descriptions help their readers see the picture they are painting with words!

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